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Naked Truth
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since 2003-12-28
Posts 11
Det, Mi.

0 posted 2004-01-16 12:08 PM


THE DEVIL LIKED ME FIRST
THEN HE MESSED UP AND FELL FOR ME
IN LOVE WITH MY LIFE HE IS
WE DATED OFF AND ON
BUT STILL ON COLD NIGHTS
HE STOOD IN MY DOOR WAY
WHEN I ARRIVED HOME
I SAW HIM INSTAED OF ME GOING IN
I PRETENDED AS IF I DIDNT SEE HIM
BUT WHAT A MISTAKE HE SAW ME
SO IN HIS FLYING CAR HE DROVE BEHIND ME
FOLLOWING ME WHERE EVER I WENT
FOOT HURTING
CARS CRASHING
LIGHTS RUNNING
OUT OF GAS I STOPPED
HE OPENED MY DOOR
WHILE STILL AFLOAT
TOOK MY HAND
I YANKED BACK
AND RAN AND RAN TILL THE END
HITCHED HIKE BACK HOME
FELL ON THE FLOOR TO SLEEP
WHAT A LONG SCARY DAY I HAD, HAD
IN MY EARS I HEARD A WHISPER
I WOKE UP
TO A NOTE TAPED TO MY ARM
MY BEATUY MY QUEEN MY UNIQUE CREATION OF ME AND MY BESTFRIEND
HOW I YEARN TO HAVE YOU BY MY SIDE
ONLY IF YOU KNEW
HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU
I KNEW SINCE THE DAY OF YOUR BIRTH WHAT GOOD YOU WOULD DO
FOR THIS WORLD
I KNEW AT THAT MOMENT I HAD TO HAVE YOU
YOU COULD REIGN IN MY CASTLE
SEE HOW AFLICKERING THE FIRE IS FOR YOU
YOU MAKE THE FIRE IN MY HOUSE HOT
HOW ITS ATTRACTION GROWS FOR YOU AS YOU GET CLOSER
THE REASON I NAMED MY PALACE HELL
IS BECAUSE THIS IS WHAT I HAVE GOIN THROUGH TO GET YOU
SO WAKE UP, WASH YOU FACE,
THIS IS NOT A JOKE MEET ME AT THE DINNER TABLE FOR A BREAKFAST FEAST I HAVE WROTE

AS I DID WHAT I WAS INSTRUCTED
I PUT ON MY BEST ATIRE
I SAT DOWN HE HELPED ME SIT
WHAT A PERFECT GENTLEMEN HE WAS
EVERYTHING WAS SO WONDERFUL
SO SPLENDID
THEN HE GOT DOWN ON ONE KNEE AND ASKED ME
TO MARRY THEE!
I PUSHED HIM AWAY AND RAN OUT THE DOOR
WHEN I GOT OUT I REALIZED I WASNT AT HOME ANYMORE
THIS PLACE I HAVE NEVER SEEN BEFORE

HE CAME OUT AND SAID
SEE MY SOON TO BE WIFE THIS COULD ALL BE YOURS
HALF OF EVERYTHING I AM!
SLAVES WERE WALKING AROUND CHAINED TO EACHOTHER
BLOOD WAS THE FLAME FOR THE FIRE
A BLACK WHOLE CAME FROM THE CEILING OR MAY I SAY THE SKY
AND PEOPLE BY THE MINUTE FELL THROUGH
HE TOLD ME I HAD NO OTHER CHOICE HIS WIFE WAS MY DESTINY
I CRYED AND JUST IN THE MOMENT I STRIPPED DOWN TO NOTHING
AND JUMPED IN THE PIT OF HELL
I FLEW STRAIGHT TO THE TOP
WHOLES BURSTED THROUGH MY CHEST LIGHTS SHINED FROM MY HEART
OUT MY MOUTH POURED WATER. ALL OF A SUDDEN THE FIRE WENT OUT
I HIT THE FLOOR
I WAS PROCEEDING TO WAKE
WHAT A BAD DREAM HAD TAKIN ME UPON
I WAS NOW HOME
THE PHONE SUDDENLY RANG
I JUMPED UP STUMBLING TO GET
WHEN I PICKED UP
THEY HUNG UP
AND THE PHONE DISSAPEARED
SINCE THEN NOTHING HAS BEEN WHAT IT ACTUALLY HAD BEEN
MY WORLD MY OLD LIFE HAD HIT ROCK BOTTOM

TESTING MY PATIENTS HE GAVE ME NEW LIFE
HE GAVE ME THIS

HE KNOWS HE WILL NEVER LOOK AT ME THE SAME AGAIN
NOR SHALL I
HE BLEW HIS CHANCE
BUT IN EVERYDAY IN EVERYWAY HE TRIES TO KILL ME
I MOVE ON A LIL STRONGER A LIL LONGER
EACH TIME
ILL FIGHT HIM TO THE END
MY GLORY IS WHAT I WIN
HE COULD HAVE HAD SOMETING GREAT BUT HIS EGO GOT IN THE MIDDLE OF HIS FATE
HE WOULDNT GIVE IT ALL TO ME
HE ONLY NEGOCIATED HALF
AND EVERYTHING I WANTED

SO HE HAD TO LET ME GO
A SCARFICE HE WILL FACE,EACH SECOND OF A MINUTE

I COULD HAVE RULED THE WORLD IN HARMONY
HE KNEW HE WANTED THAT
BUT HE FIGHTS A BIGGER BATTLE THAN ME
HE FIGHTS WITH DEAD SHOULDERS ON HIS BACK

HE IS HIS OWN ENEMY- AND HE DOESN’T EVEN KNOW


AS HE COMES FOR YOU MY FRIEND REMEMBER THIS
HE LOVE YOU NOT, HE WANTS ME
I AM HIS ONLY TRUE LOVE
HE WILL DECIEVE ME FOR ETERNATY
HE KNOWS:
HURTING YOU KILLS ME, I FIGHT YOUR BATTLES
AND WE TRIUMPH TOGETHER

BUT ITS YOUR CHOICE TO MAKE
NO LOVE LOST
DECISIONS ARE HARD BUT SO IS LIFE
LIVE IT WITH ME
OR LIVE IT BLIND WILLING NOT TO SEE
ENOUGH OF THAT I NEED A FAVOR
TELL HIM …PLEASE DO TELL HIM SOMETHING
FOR ME !

I TALKED TO HIS MOTHER AND SHE TOLD ME TO TELL HIM

“ MOMMIE LOVES YOU”
BUT NO REWARDS WILL BE GIVEN TO DISOBIEDENCE
THIS WALL THAT YOU BUILT IN PAIN AND FEAR
WILL BE THE WALL YOU FACE TO DEATH HAS COME NEAR”

SO I FOLLOW HIM IN HIS DAILY WALKS
BLACK ACID TEARS CLOUD HIS EYES
I FOLLOW HIM FOR THE LOVE OF YOU
I AM THE OTHER CHOICE BY YOUR SIDE
I GIVE HIM NO MORE CHOICES
HELL COME AROUND WHEN HE WANTS
I LEAVE HIM ALONE NOT BECAUSE I CANT KILL HIM
ONLY BECAUSE I CAN
BUT I DONT SEEK REVENGE
THE ONLY THING BETWEEN ME AND HIM IS YOU
HE BETTER BE GLAD BECAUSE IF IT WASN'T FOR YOU THE ONLY THING BETWEEN ME AND HIM WOULD BE THE KNIFE OF DEATH THROUGH HIS HEART IT WOULD REST
SO TELL HIM TO SEEK HIS MOTHER FAST
FOR WHO EVER SEEKS HIM FIRST RECIEVES THE LAST.
I PUT THIS ON MY LIFE


TO HIM
P.S OHHH ARENT YOU SO JEALOUS
WISH YOU HAD ME NOW...
YOU DONT HAVE MUCH TIME
YOU BETTER DO WHAT YOU GOTTA DO
BECAUSE WHEN I GET FED UP
ILL GET RED AND THEN GRAB YOU BY THE NECK AND GO HEAD UP
LEAVE YOU IN MY BED CHAINED UP BLEEDING ON FIRE WEARING MY ATIRE
HAHA WOULDN’T THAT BE NICE TO GET BACK EVERYTHING YOU HAVE EVER GIVEN
BUT I WON'T DO THAT
MY HUSBAD WOULDNT ALLOW
BUT TO KILL YOU WOULD BE HIS ONLY REBOUND

© Copyright 2004 ~Kay - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
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1 posted 2004-01-16 08:41 AM


good effort,,,but, take into considration,,,,all capitols, is like yelling,,,and punctuation is a big help in setting the pace and timing of your words,,,,,,keep it comming
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14
Posts 70
dune
2 posted 2004-01-16 02:20 PM


Paired opposites define your longings and those longings imprison you
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