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Teen Poetry #7

they [[JUDGE]]

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

0 posted 2004-01-15 10:57 PM

they judge you by your mistakes?
IS IT RIGHT?
they judge you by being stupid ?
IS IT RIGHT?
they judge you because your attitude?
IS THAt right?
they judge you for being you?
is that right?

BUT THEY DONT JUDGE WHAT YOU GO IN YOU..
THEY DONT JUDGE YOU BY YOUR SWEETHEART OR ATLEAST YOUR PERSONALY BELIEFS..THEY JUDGE YOU BECAUSE THEY HATE YOU AND THEY DONT NOTHING GOOD FOR YOU..

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

1 posted 2004-01-15 11:47 PM

SORRY ABOUT SOME MISTAKES I MADE IN THIS POEM..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2004-01-16 12:03 PM

just a soft touch, dont use all caps, its painful to read and does not show the true spirit of the poem.....try and edit this using lower case letters?

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

duncan idaho
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

3 posted 2004-01-16 02:10 PM

NAH, ALL CAPS IS FINE FINE FINE. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO. I MEAN, LETS FACE IT, THERE ARE MORE WAYS TO EXPRESS YOURSELF WITH PAPER AND PEN THAN with THESE COMPUTERS, SO we HAVE TO USE WHAT WE'VE GOT*****************************************************************************************************************************************&^$(Y)

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