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Teen Poetry #7

What am i?

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

0 posted 2004-01-15 10:23 PM

Something is choking me really bad....
i feel like am the world's end.
Its like pain.
That im sure i wont ever understand how to repair?
It feels like people are here to judge
Not to love.
They act as if we have no hearts
But we have the nerds to do as we want.
We cry, we die
But these days it’s not even worth it for u to deny
When u have faith that means your heart is a clay
.
when have a heart they count you blind.
.
or even beyond the word ""LOVE""
the choose your friends and even control your breath.does that make sense?? maybe in a world call earth...[[""YES""]]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-15 10:54 PM

It feels like people are here to judge
Not to love'''

sadly society teaches this, in a world where no one judged would maybe be a better place?

this is haunting, I can relate....hugsssss

Lauren~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-01-15 11:27 PM

Now you're getting it! Much better! and the write itself is good,,,,,
good job!
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

3 posted 2004-01-16 09:00 AM

well thanks for the comments im soo glad to be back too

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