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True Love Cry |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
Tonight I saw my true love cry Burned inside and made me want to die My girl brings my world so much joy Her feelings should not be treated as a toy Delicate as a bloosmed rose She needs my nuture to help her grow Not tears of sorrow to weigh her soul down Smiles and giggles to lift her frown Tonight I saw my true love cry Burned inside and made me want to die We must put the bad behind us,live one day at a time And let our hearts float on love's musical rhyme Pain doesn't stay within hearts forever Dust ourselves off and stay together Through all the crap thick and thin We've always been able to try again Dreams in our future, and love in our sight We will hold each other through all the painful nights. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
How lovely that she has someone that feels her pain,,,and is there to hold her,,,,I know, that having my loves arms around me when I feel pain,,,be it mental or physical,,,,is the most wonderful thing in the world,,,,, one word I do believe is misspelled,,,and should be "bloodred rose"? otherwise,,, good stuff Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Xonicx Junior Member
since 2004-01-14
Posts 20Vancouver, WA |
not what it was intended to be, but I like the idea..  Does sound better that way. It was suppose to be like a bloosiming rose...not sure how to spell it or whatever. But I like your idea more!-------------------------------- |
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