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Metalhead4lyfe
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0 posted 2004-01-14 09:03 PM


To Katie, the love of my life

When we talk my heart skips a beat
when you walk off and say goodbye
The feeling is really neat
Each goodbye makes me feel like I died

Each day I wake up and think of you
Each time I lay my head down to rest
I look a the world with a whole new view
I smile and think "your the freakin best!"

Of all the girls I've seen, your the most beautiful
Sexy, funny, somewhat mysterious, loveable
Wanting to be with you, your like an addiction and very huggable
Shrouded in things I've never felt, it's most wonderful

Thought of suicide creeping up? Don't cuz that ain't cool
even if you think no one gives a damn
You should forget that idea right way because I care
And if no one else cares, forget em, they're all fools.

No matter what happens in life
Always remember one thing
Through all the strife
I'll always be here for you for anytime, anything

[This message has been edited by Metalhead4lyfe (01-14-2004 09:35 PM).]

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lilibeelee
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1 posted 2004-01-14 11:43 PM


welcome to pip! good job! keep it up!
skyshine
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2 posted 2004-01-14 11:54 PM


This is very sweet! I'm sure Katie LOVED it!!! Welcome to Passions!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-15 07:58 AM


Welcome to PIP Metalhead,,,,,
As a fellow metal head,,,(GWAR are my idols)...it is great to see how well you put your feelings accross.....
I once said that I was a metal head for life,,,,,and at 32 years of age,,,,,I still feel the same,,,,
Take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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4 posted 2004-01-15 07:05 PM


I thoroughly enjoyed this.. Katie is very lucky that she has someone to write these words for her.
Check your e-mail for a special suprise from all of us here at Passions.

WELCOME TO THE FAMILY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

duncan idaho
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5 posted 2004-01-15 07:11 PM


goode stuff, katty

don lissen to thoze peeple,
they're all on a combinashun of morphine and
happy pills.

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