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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2004-01-12 01:51 PM


Looking down into that tiny face
At life that grew inside of me
A life created from our love
Sometymes, it’s hard for me to believe
That I gave him life ~
The one that “pushed” him into the world
Nine months he was inside
Now I get to hold him in my arms
And stare into those bright blue eyes

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

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1 posted 2004-01-12 07:11 PM


wow, that's intense.  obviously alot of emotion behind this poem.  very good.
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2 posted 2004-01-13 09:42 PM


This was beautiful, Tamma....and congrats to you! Harvey will love reading his mommy's poems about him when he's older.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

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