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RedDiamond1307
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since 2004-01-05
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0 posted 2004-01-11 10:10 PM



Are there really any words I can say?
I find this state I'm in so tough.
I don't understand why you just couldn't stay,
the time we had doesn't seem enough.

YOu spoke to my angry heart,
You held my love in your hand.
How come we had such a painful part?
How come no longer, by me you stand?

The one that hurt me so,
Still lived in my heart and mind.
To him I could never say no,
in his eyes I was blind.

Your the one who made me forget,
the one who broke my heart and soul.
Since the first day we met
you started mended my heart and made it whole.

I thought you'd never make me cry,
Forever, I thought we'd always be.
But on this day, i find that's a lie,
It became the nightmare I could never see.

I asked you for very few things,
one was to be gentle with my heart,
But now I have two broken wings,
cause from this life you had to depart.

I keep looking in all places we grew,
it's where your supposed to be.
but I never seem to find you,
and your all I long to see.

I refuse to believ that this is the end,
bcause all our memorys will remain inside.
My hearts that's torn, soon shall mend,
because even though your not here, your spirit never died.


RESSE I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU...I MISS YOU, BUT I KNOW YOUR WATCHING OVER ME!

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
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1 posted 2004-01-11 10:17 PM


Awwww... its so sad. It almost made me cry! I really liekd this one. I hope to hear more.
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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