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kissa~rachelle
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0 posted 2004-01-11 10:05 PM



Why do you do it?
I just want to know.
How could you be so cruel,
and never let your feelings show?

I tell you i love you,
but just as a friend,
and you get all mad,
so my pity, to you, i send.

I pity that you think,
everythings about you.

i pity that you think,
everyone should bow to you.

I pity that i feel,
the way i feel for you.

Sometimes i think,
that your the one,
and to you i want to run,
then sometimes i hate everything about you.

Sometimes were Just Friends,
sometimes were not.
Sometimes i think our friendship,
is basically shot!

Sometimes i lay in bed and dream,
someday well be more than just friends,
then i wake up,
and suddenly the dream ends.

I think i've finally realized,
we are meant to be just friends.
Reality finally sets it,
My heart begins to mend.

It wont happen over night,
as much as i wish it would.
I dont want to be Just friends,
but i think we probably should.

You like my best friend,
and i am trying my best to accept it,
but its really hard for me,
to sit back, i just want you to quit.


I hope you understand,
and we can still be Just Friends,
no weirdness between us,
lets tie up all the loose ends.

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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rose
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since 2003-08-02
Posts 53

1 posted 2004-01-12 07:56 PM


hey, thanks for this poem.  the style was a little weak overall...like you kinda lost your rhyme scheme as it went along but i guess that's ok.  anyway, what i wanted to say was that i really feel what youre going thru. it hurts, doesn't it? my best friend is a guy and i experience a very similar set of emotions towards him.  so thanks for posting!
lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12
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2 posted 2004-01-12 08:55 PM


I thougth that this was a good poem. Keep it up!
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
3 posted 2004-07-06 03:55 PM


I liked it alot! i could tell you put alot of eeling into it! good write, keep it up!

~*.:Leah:.*~

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4 posted 2004-07-25 10:32 PM


Throughout my life I've realized that if its too hard, and if getting a significant other means working your butt off to convinve, seduce, please the other- it wasn't meant to be.

Isn't love a flowing, natural, and beautiful thing?

If friends is just a 'just', then so be it.
But wouldn't you rather have a good friend you're sort of attracted to, than to have a boyfriend you really hate? lol

regardless, the style of this poem could have flowed a bit better, but the content was great and i liked what you were saying

You captured what many of us have felt at one point or another

I left my wallet in El Segundo...
And I gotta get it
I got got to get it!

moonguardian2004
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 64
MA, USA
5 posted 2004-07-26 09:21 PM


Great write! I just went through what you expressed. Just friends is so hard when you care for someone. Your ryming got a little weak but the poem was still great!

~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2004-08-02 06:55 PM


Kissa...you know what? I usually seem to be able to relate to your poems, and this one is no exception.  You explained how I'm feeling right now exactly.

Nice job.

~Alli~

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

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