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akforty7
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since 2004-01-10
Posts 18


0 posted 2004-01-11 06:11 PM


If I could touch the stars,
I'd give them all to you,
and if the moon was in my reach,
that would be yours, too.

I pray to see your smile,
To warm and brighten my day.
You always seem to be in my thoughts,
you are special to me, in every way.

Like the stars in the heavens
your eyes shine down on me,
and when you close them tight,
I hope I'm what you see.

I couldn't be any happier,
especially when I'm by your side,
all the feelings I feel,
in you, I try to confide.

Sometimes the words 'I love you'
are hard for me to say,
but my love for you is endless,
and I love you more with each new day.

[This message has been edited by akforty7 (01-11-2004 10:34 PM).]

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Match
Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286
Canada Edmonton
1 posted 2004-01-12 09:21 PM


oh oh oh..this poem is adorable, simple and sweet
-ash

Im a child,
who writes adult poetry.

WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2004-01-13 12:11 PM


I don't usually like love poem, but this is beautiful. Perfectly expressed.
Thank you for sharing. This is going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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