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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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0 posted 2004-01-10 10:24 PM


WHY CANT LIFE BE EASIER ???
WHY WHY??
WHY IS IT EVERYTHING WE DO IS ALWAYZ NOT GOOD ENOUGH ...WHY IS IT WHEN I TY TO BE THE BEST PEOPLE TURN ME DOWN??
WHY IS IT WHEN I LOVE THEY HATE ME?
WHY IS IT WHEN I CRYTHEY DONT EVEN CARE?
WHY IS IT WHEN I TRY TO KILL MYSELF IT NEVER WORKS?
WHY IS IT WHEN I TRY SOOOOOOOOO SOO SOO HARD ITS NEVER WORTH IT????

IS IT BECAUSE IM REALLLY WEIRD?
OR IS IT BECAUSE IM REALLY NOT GOOD ENOUGH??

WHO EVER READS THIS ANSWER ME PLZZ

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sweet_lost_palestinian1
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1 posted 2004-01-11 06:09 PM


hey..its me i got ur passwork..mariela...this poem is veryyyyyyyyyyyy cute i willl answer u .come ovver and i will tell u.........
xEmperorEmber
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2 posted 2004-01-11 07:47 PM


life is hard because you have no freedom to explore. you want to go out and see whats waiting for you, but everyone views you as still being too young to go persue any of that. It creates alot of tension and frustration, but there going to come a time when their voices dont matter, and you can finally hear your own through all the confusion. Patience is definately rewarded in this situation.

love,
here sit on my couch

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3 posted 2004-01-11 08:53 PM


You expressed yourself well. I think that the most you can do is be yourself..nothing more and nothing less and those who appreciate that will stick around. Looking forward to reading more

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

sweet_lost_palestinian1
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4 posted 2004-01-11 11:24 PM


thank u all for the advice u made me feel better ...thanks
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