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akforty7
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0 posted 2004-01-10 12:20 PM


I close my eyes and see your face,
any time or any place.
I'll tell the world I'm your man.
That's how much in love I am.

Holding you, so close to heart,
insures we'll never be apart.
I close my eyes, and there you are.
I never let you stray too far.

When we're together, we're as one.
Our hearts alive, and life is fun.
We've been this way since we first met,
without a moment of regret.

Each of us is the other's pride,
man and woman, side-by-side.
Reaching for the rainbow's end,
two-as-one, we ride the wind.

I close my eyes and see your face,
any time or any place.
You're here, in me, alive and real.
That's how much in love I feel.

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Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-10 03:25 AM


How lovely,,,,,,,
WELCOME TO PASSIONS
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 2004-01-10 04:28 PM


first off...
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!
Im shur you'll love it here...its a great place to go to express yourself

The poem was great! You really got your emotion out through your words and you've captured your love for this person in the poem. You did an amazing job I look forward to reading more

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

skyshine
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3 posted 2004-01-10 04:51 PM


What a sweet love poem! And welcome to Passions!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

sweet_lost_palestinian1
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4 posted 2004-01-10 05:08 PM


omg omg omg omg.......this poem is sooo nice and cute...keep up the greatest work  and i wish u the best ...ur women must be hppy with u ..i guess well keep it uppp...may god portact u and give u more

akforty7
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5 posted 2004-01-13 01:38 AM


thank you all for the warm welcome
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