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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
DONT LOVE, DONT HATE, DONT GIVE.. PEOPLE ARE NOT REAL THEY FAKE YOU OUT AND PUT YOU DONE..IF U HATE THEY ASK WHY AND IF U LOVE THEY ASK WHY ??..SO DONT EVEN BOTHER....PEOPLE DONT DESREV U OR UR LOVE ...THEY FIRST STAND UP FOR U AS IF THEY LOVE YOU BUT NEXT THEY WILL PUT U DONE LIKE WHEN CATS LEAVE/FORGET THERE OWN CHILD ..SO DONT BOTHER...PEOPLE THESE DAYZ ARE JUST LOVING YOU BECAUSE THEY NEED SOMETHING ..EVEN THOUGH U THINK ITS RIGHT TO LOVE BUT IF U SOMEDAY WANNA LOVE ,,FIRST LOVE YOUR NAME AND TAKE CARE OF IT AND SECOND LOVE WHAT YOU GOT INSIDE U...TRUST ME BELIEVE ME ITS NOT WORTH IT BEING THERE,,... |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
As with your post, "Why?????", you have a lot of emotions that come thru,if I may suggest,,,space your sentences a bit,,,let the reader have pauses,,,,take care Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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