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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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0 posted 2004-01-09 11:51 PM


I've had some major writers block for about the last 3 months.  This isnt the greatest, but it's probably the best I've come up with in the last few months.  Let me know what you think...

SOMETHING NEW

Sometimes I stray from Your side
And sometimes You're hard to see
But I know that You see everthing
And in all I do, You're beside me


I know You'll always be here
For I am nothing without You
And always You try to lead me
In all that I say and do

Chorus:
Lord, You've changed me from something simple
To something You can use
Took me rust and weathered as I was
And made me something new

Before I met You, all I did
Was done purely for myself
But now I have become a tool for You
Not just a tool on a shelf

Chorus

Bridge:
I'm no longer who I was before
I've sifted through the good and bad
Now I see that life with you
Is so much more than what I had

Chorus

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

© Copyright 2004 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-10 12:12 PM


pretty good,,even tho,,,,,god isn't a topic i care for,,,, ,,,,im so far from his side,,I'll never see it,,nor care to,,,,,,,
Michelle
and again,,,the block seems to be no hurdle,,,,

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 2004-01-11 09:00 PM


Well its good to see a familiar name around here after all this time
your work is amazing as always...keep it comin !

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

akforty7
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since 2004-01-10
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3 posted 2004-01-11 10:53 PM


good job, dude!
vlraynes
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4 posted 2004-02-04 02:33 AM



Nice job on this, Cody...

It's good to read you again...

~Vicky

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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