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lilibeelee
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0 posted 2004-01-09 10:11 PM


I was lost
So many times

Waiting for my rescuer
Dreaming of how he would be

Dreaming of his face
His kindness
His smile

I've fallen
More times then I can get up

Do I finaly get what I deserve?
Are my dreams coming true?

It's to hard to belive
My search is over

I have found him
My love, my soul

Now that I found him
I don't want to let go

It brings my heart steady
It makes me want to belong

This love, I can't let go

As soon as I start slipping now
His hands lift me

He wont let me fall

Everything feels so much lighter
These worldly burdens that I bore
You make it all disapear

You make it all matter
Kind arms hold me near

Where would I be without you
I don't want to even know

Before my heart felt so fragile
It's been droped, forgotten

My Heart now feels light
It Feels full

I must have known you beyond this life
Because it feels so real
It feels like destiny

I was ment to be here
Right here, with you


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BrokenDreams
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1 posted 2004-01-09 11:23 PM


This is really sweet. Nice write.
Jen

Dying
Is an art, like everything else.
I do it exceptionally well.

I do it so it feels like hell.
I do it so it feels real.
I guess you could s

sweet_lost_palestinian1
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2 posted 2004-01-10 10:37 PM


reallly nicee..keep it uppp...and keep writting
Sweetpoet16m4u04
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3 posted 2004-01-11 11:44 AM


One word to describe this and that word is BEAUTIFUL! Keep up the good work hun very sweet poem about what destiny actually means to someone.

Hugs,
Chris

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4 posted 2004-01-11 08:56 PM


Sounds like you have yourself quite the guy!! Beautifully written...

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

kissa~rachelle
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5 posted 2004-01-11 09:36 PM


Another great write from you! I hope to hear more.
~kissa~

Snickers123
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6 posted 2004-06-06 07:23 PM


It was a really cute and sweet poem, keep writing!

~*.:Leah:.*~

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