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Teen Poetry #7

A fresh Sunset

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-07 03:08 PM

A friendship is born at sunrise
With the soft scents and chilly mists,
Warmth and cofmort is found in glory
The glory in which the new friend provides
A hug of hope, and a kiss of laughter
Brings soft rose petals fair adew
Give time and ever lasting love
And this friendship will conspire
It rises as the early morning sun
And shadows with the evenings stars
Each day it promises its return
Forgiving, and always forgetting
When the sun falls, and evenings sets in
Your friendship is at rest,
Only to find that it will come back again
To repair the hearts wounds of eve's demise
Bring back those soft feelings
And bloom those morning glories
Give peace to all who feels desire
And let rest at sun sets fall.

[This message has been edited by muchos (01-08-2004 02:32 PM).]

the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

1 posted 2004-01-07 10:20 PM

Wonderful imagery. I wish I could do this in my poems. I need to write about the beauty in things. To appreciate this would be a great goal.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-02-01 12:14 PM

yeah i did like that, but. it didnt really... flow...

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-02-01 11:25 AM

sweet write,,,,,sometmes, you have to listen with the heart to find the flow
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2004-02-01 09:22 PM

I really love this poem. The imagery is excellent, and the poem overall had a soft feel to it.
Very refreshing.
Thanks for sharing, this is going in my lirbary.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

unwantedspork
Junior Member

since 2004-02-02

Posts 24

5 posted 2004-02-02 11:25 PM

I completly agree with winter wren.

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