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muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-06 04:06 PM

Sometimes I'd cry alone at night
With thoughts of death and pain
I wondered what the end was like
I prayed my thoughts regain
I hope to God there is a truth
Behind this agony
I wish I wasn't so alone
Behind these walls of anger
I cry myself to sleep at night
Hoping these thoughts would go away
I want a chance at happiness
Instead of feeling pain
I hate the thought of dying
Or that there is an end
But sometimes you just cant help but feel
That there is no other end
An end to this mysery
That keeps breaking your heart again
Or an end to this confusion
In which there is no end
I lie awake alone at night
Fearing all I feel inside
I hope to God I'm strong enough
To fight this reacurring tide
I'll get the strength I need one day
And this will disappear
I'll fight the thoughts that run my mind
And conquer every fear
I hold my head up high
And I pray each day for strength
I have more then I had the day before
I'm going to be ok

Thenumber7
New Member

since 2004-01-07

Posts 5

1 posted 2004-01-07 10:10 PM

I hear that. Stong voice=quality work.

the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

2 posted 2004-01-07 10:14 PM

Everyone feels this way sometimes. But, most people hide their feelings. You strive for the real truth, but you most likely won't find it and it drives us insane. I find it tough to write poems about this subject, but you did it quite well. Very well done.

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

3 posted 2004-01-24 08:22 AM

you aren`t alone!
~Emma~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2004-01-24 06:08 PM

I've spent many nights awake in bed feeling the same things not too long ago..the most important part of it all is knowing and recognizing that your gonna be ok. Your not alone...Wonderful write...

Keep up the great work!

Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

5 posted 2004-01-25 02:01 AM

hello..i actuallly enjoied this poem its very nice keep it upp...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2004-01-26 04:29 PM

I realy enjoyed your words. This poem was amazing. I can tell it had a lot of emotion in it. I really liked the end.
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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