navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » Need
Teen Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Need Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-01-06 03:35 PM



So many months,
Spent apart,
I yearn for your touch.

This urge is so strong,
It’s almost hard to breathe,
I ache for your kiss.

So many memories,
Left behind,
I crave for your love.

That one emotion,
That always hurts,
You are my addiction.


Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy

© Copyright 2004 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
muchos
Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102

1 posted 2004-01-07 03:02 PM


i totally dig this poem. its soo good, and your last line finishes it perfectly. great work.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » Need

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary