breaking up is hard but realizing your life goes on makes you feel a whole lot better

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breaking up is hard but realizing your life goes on makes you feel a whole lot better

Shari
New Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 3

0 posted 2004-01-03 05:27 PM

Farewell to the Feeling

I'm finally feeling better even though I know it's not the end.

I'll always love you, but I odn't want you as a friend.

I realized my life doesn't revolve around you or no one else.

In the end I've always got me, I'm always by myself.

So now i say Farewell to the feeling, the feeling of being in love,

that ended a long time ago, it ended with your hug.

I hope you find happiness, just not in me, I think I like loving you, without us being together

So somewhere deep down at the bottom of my heart I'll always have love for you even in eternity.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2004-01-03 07:32 PM

it was alright. it was pretty straight forward.check your grammar, keep posting!!
-alex

*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2004-01-04 02:52 AM

Welcome to pip! Yes I have to agree with young blood on the grammer thing, just a few errors that plug the flow up a bit. So sad to give up on love, I myself am a hopeless romantic so these pieces always sadden me. well anyways I hope you have a long happy stay here with us, check your email for a specail note!
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

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