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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
I wish you'd see me through a mirror, And hold my heart in your hand. You'd feel the beat of my love for you, While watching my heart dance Feel my pain and tell me you care For I love the thought that your always there, Because I wish upon a midnight star And let out my thoughts to where you are Give me time and a heart thats pure I only wanted a love to last Instead I got more than I bargained for I got my future, present, and past So tell me you love me and smile my way You'll make this broken heart melt away Give me all that you can give And i promise to love and always forgive [This message has been edited by muchos (01-03-2004 04:00 PM).] |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
it was pretty neat how you switched rhyming schemes in it. i liked it, great work!! -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I really liked it. It was sweet, and rhymed really well. I hope to hear more. ~kissa~ P.S. I dont think that i know you, but i'm not sure. |
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