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The Apology
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The Apology |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
This poem was written for a real close girl friend of mine that i opened up my heart for and let my emotions flow out. After realizing i was obsessing because i knew that she had a boyfriend and yet i continued to pour out my heart to her i thought that this was in line for my actions. Enjoy!! The Apology I apologize for all my recent actions I guess my emotions poured at as a result of a recent attraction. I didn’t mean to takes things this far I fell in love with you on the wish of an evening star. I apologize that I crushed on you so hard With many feelings I just couldn’t disregard. You have another man you chosen to give your love I realize that now after looking to the man above. My dream was for you to be happy And was too blind to see that my dream was your reality. You are truly one special girl, And I hope for sure that he makes you his world. There is one thing I won’t apologize for And that’s telling you my feelings were 100 percent pure. So there is my apology to you With a hug and kiss and the three little words I LOVE YOU!! |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I believe its always good to get your emotions towards another out no matter the conciquiences that way there are no secrets and you know that no matter what she knows you care for her. And who doesn't like to know that there loved and have someone to turn to when everyone else it gone, right? Nicely done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
this poem is so well written gosh i wish i had your talent! -*-cant wait to hear more of your stuff-*- -*-broken627-*- love is like a puzzle when the pieces dont fit you have to move on |
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frolicking dolphin Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268my own special world |
Like all of the poems I've read from you, I loved this, most guys I know just avoid me after something happens that could bruise their ego, and I haven't ever heard an apology as sweet as this ~*~Karen~*~ |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
I totally agree with everything that everyone else has said, most guys that i know would have just given up and moved on, but you had the sweetest apology that i have ever heard, well done, keep being honest and sincere, it will get you far..... **There is no such thing as a promise!!** |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
This was a great write. You are so in touch with yourself. I think that is a great quality in you. Knowing you faults and being able to express them are great. Wonderful Job! |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
hey chris, great work, and i appreciate the thought of it all. your a totally sweet guy. i hope that girl knows what shes missing. too bad i didnt live in Mass....... |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Thanks for all the wonderful comments. I couldnt believe that this would be so well liked! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
We all know how this feels and you're very brave to tell this girl you care. She's missing out! lol She must really be special to you. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
I liked this write very well...keep up the good work. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Aww... another heart wrenching poem! You are so sweet!! I guess you've shown me that there are really guys out there taht are actually sweet, and dont always think about... sex. I hope that she is happy, and more importantly, I hope you find happiness too! I cant wait to read more of your poems! And thank you for your sweet comments on my poem Missed. Until we meet again, well.. ya know what i mean!~lol~ ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
Yes that was very good and I didn't feel that the rhyming was forced one bit. Well done, I want to see some more, post something else on?? |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
yet another amazing poem from you chris..... i agree i dont think i have ever heard such a sweet, sincere and honest apology come from any male i have ever known....... this girll / woman who ever she is must be completely insane not to have fallen head over heals in love with you because of how much you are intouch with your feelings, and how much of a sweetheart you are....... anyway enough rambling from me... keep up the writing Mel |
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