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Teen Poetry #7

My heart

crystalclearpoems
Junior Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 16

0 posted 2003-12-31 04:02 PM

you say you want me back again and that you will not lie
you say you dont want to hurt me you say you never will
but my heart wont accept it for it is hurting still
i thought that i could get rid of the love that i had for you
but through time and sorrow it came rushing back anew
should i give you my heart though it says no
take the chance of breaking it
and putting it through sorrow and woe.
or should i try ignoring these feelings i have for you
go along with daily life trying not to think of you

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

1 posted 2003-12-31 04:20 PM

i've been there allmooost done that.but please if ur heart is telling u to go back to love,give it one more try.trying to forget it will only make it harder.but deep inside u know the right thing to do so search deep within and do whats right for u.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-12-31 06:17 PM

Star T I couldn't have said it better myself! Good write I enjoyed the play on emotions in the piece as well as the cofusion, for those kinds of things are confusing! Lovely write, nicely done!
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

crystalclearpoems
Junior Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 16

3 posted 2003-12-31 07:01 PM

thanks for the comments!

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