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Unwanted love |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I am still working on this poem, i hope ya'll like it. UNWANTED LOVE I shouldn't feel this way, I'm going out with your cousin. There is so much i wanna say, but i am so afraid! I am falling so hard for you, its all so screwed* up. I think i am straight trippin boo, straight trippin' for you! Beleive me when i say, I wish i didn't feel this way. I wish i could control my feelings, I wish i could just throw them away! I wish i could say, these feelings would soon go away, but these feelings i have, I don't think they are fake! I wanna be with you, all day, all night, all month, all year! Through every laugh and every tear. I am still adding to this poem. So, i hope yall liked it so far! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
those feelings can strike at any age,,,,and sometimes more so,,when you get older,,,,,so far, so good with your work,,,,,looking forward to see what you add Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
hmmm....it was ok. its too straight forward for my liking. good work anyway!! -alex |
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the_fortress Junior Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 28 |
I liked that a lot. It shows how emotions can change. But, if you don't like the person you are with, you should get with the person you want to be... I know it's much easier for me to say this. Well anyways, I really enjoyed that. And I love this I wanna be with you, all day, all night, all month, all year! Through every laugh and every tear |
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