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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2003-12-29 01:55 AM

This poem was written when i was really really mad, so i had to edit it, so if some things sound korny, sorry.

I dont want to feel like this!
I hate you
You cause so much freakin* pain
I cant deal with this edit .

I hate the way you smile
and i forget all the pain you've caused me!
I hate the way you say "I love you"
and nothing else freaking* matters!

You shouldn't be able to get away
with all the edit you pull!
You shouldn't be able to say "I love you
cuz i know it's all bull!

YOu shouldn't impact my life so much,
my world revolves around you,
and it shouldn't be!

You're not worth all this
screwed* up pain you cause!
but i just cant seem to
let you go, and I HATE IT!

[This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (12-30-2003 02:54 AM).]

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2003-12-29 01:42 PM

ahhh...I hate you rants, yes I have several of those myself. thank you for editing your poem accordingly for it has very good emotion that should not be hindered my vulgar speech. Overall nicely done.
~Live and Laugh~

Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

OO_the_irish_one
New Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 4
Cali

2 posted 2003-12-29 10:21 PM

i say beat him up

Dempsey

LegalSecret69
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 69
Virginia

3 posted 2003-12-30 01:43 AM

I know how you feel... and the poem doesn't sound korny, even after edited. You really let your emotions out, and it can be recognized in this poem. Keep writing...it'll help things pass..or at least it works for me. But anyhow.. Good job!

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2003-12-30 02:39 AM

thanks for all your comments! I really appreciate them. I hope to hear more.
~kissa~

crystalclearpoems
Junior Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 16

5 posted 2003-12-31 04:08 PM

very good poem! i know what you were going through then and its great how you can let it out through poetry!

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

6 posted 2003-12-31 08:13 PM

I hate feeling that way too! And I've had it happen often enough.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

the_fortress
Junior Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 28

7 posted 2004-01-01 01:43 AM

Some people don't derserve to say I love you.. They won't mean it and do it for stupid things. Thats what I got out of the poem anyways... Don't abuse love. It could make you great, or ruin you. Depending on how you use it.

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

8 posted 2004-01-01 12:57 PM

definitely not corny. this is an emotional piece, and a good one at that. keep up the good work, and thanks for editing. :0)

*toasty*

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-02 05:02 PM

i loved this poem i felt i could relate alot.your very talented-*--also it definetly was not corny-*-
-*-Broken627-*-

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

10 posted 2004-01-02 05:43 PM

I think this is a poem we can all relate to, atleast sometime in our life. You showed your emotions really well, nice work

~*~Karen~*~

"One can never consent to creep when one feels the impulse to soar" - Helen Keller

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

11 posted 2004-01-02 06:06 PM

Great job kissa!! I can honestly say that yeah i felt that about a girl i liked here and there. Look forward to hearing more keep up the good work hun!

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

12 posted 2004-01-02 09:42 PM

alright now that was nice.best part was i totally related to it and when i felt that way..so many times,i was THAT angry.what surprised me though is how many ppl who posted replies said they had felt this way one time or the other.could it be that people misunderstand love?or simply that love isnt always sweet?

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

13 posted 2004-01-20 11:25 PM

Love isnt always sweet i think. People say that love is forever, but i disagree. I mean true love, yeah, its foreevr, but love, or atleast waht you might think is love, i am not so sure. Sometimes you think you love someone, when it is just lust, all just a game. I dont know, i dont event think i am making any sense. whatever. Thanks fo rall your comments.
~kissa~

*bleeding 4 eternity*
Junior Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 10
Alabama, U.S.

14 posted 2005-07-17 12:21 PM

I like it. I feel the same way right now.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

15 posted 2005-07-17 01:20 AM

Oh la la that was full of anger, it sounds like it sucks. Good write

Im sorry i've failed you all.

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