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Strider612
Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46
Alabama, United States of America

0 posted 2003-12-22 12:01 PM


Here's something I've been working on...I know I'm new here, but I wanted to post this anyway.


You want a heart that's strong and true
I'm glad to give you mine
You don't want to give too much away
I'll try to walk that line
I'll do my best to heal old hurts
There's no better task
I'll find the strength you've locked away
The only thing I ask

Is come to me when you need someone
Is that so hard to learn?
You know I want to be right there
If your worries should return
I'll be your winter haven
A place where you can hide
When the hard times come
Come running to my side

You worry that I'll hurt you
Don't want to have me near
Trust me and I'll prove to you
There's nothing you should fear
It may take some getting used to
I'll try to take it slow
I won't go further than you want
But I want you to know

You can come to me when you need a friend
If there's any strength you lack
I'll be there to help you stand
If your hurts ever come back
You'll have a part with me
A place you can abide
When the hard times come
Come running to my side

I’ll do all that is needed
To help you on your way
Let my love surround you
You know I’m here to stay
Don’t worry that I’ll harm you
I’ll do all the good I’ve planned
Fall back into my shelter
You need to understand

If clouds should burst upon you
I'll shield you from the rain
If troubles should surround you
I'll try to ease your pain
And every ache you're feeling
In me you can confide
When the hard times come
Come running to my side.

© Copyright 2003 Levi Pressnell - All Rights Reserved
WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
1 posted 2003-12-22 12:36 PM


Welcome to pip!
Excellent first post!! It reminds me of me and a friend of mine, I have trust issues . I loved the poem, very sweet, thank you for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

*Belabebeautiful*
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
2 posted 2003-12-22 01:48 AM


oh wow...beautiful sweet poem. I adored every line such honesty and emotion..I was just swept away. Welcome to piptalk, I hope you have a long warm and welcome stay. Incredible first post I'm just blown away...
~Live and Laugh~


Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less
~Bella~

[This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (12-27-2003 03:36 PM).]

serenities_blood
Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
3 posted 2003-12-22 03:00 AM


please if you dont keep posting here...you have to keep writing poetry. You have such a talent
Or you know just email me with oyur latest! It was awesome! I'm bookmarking that one!

(L) (L)

xoxLORxox

aussie teen
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
4 posted 2003-12-23 10:43 PM


really really nice poem.....
keep up with the writing..... you have excelent talent and are natural..... none of the words seemed to be forced into how the poem turned out..... really nice work...
keep up on the writing.. just be true to yourself and the words will follow......
Mel

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