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Teen Poetry #7

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broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-12-21 04:57 PM

Its hard to face these facts
that everything between you and i is in the past
i hate this feeling when im around you
it reminds me of the times when i was the one who you adored
and how you just dont see me anymore
i want to tell you how much i care
but your feelings for me just arent there
nothing can heal this broken heart
i dont know what it is
this time i just cant move on
i know deep down you and i werent supposed to part
so give me just one last chance before throw us away
before you let the last broken pieces of my heart rot away in decay
if i could just let you know
its so many months later i cant help but cry
at just what i would do for you to give me one last try
i want to know what it feels like to be happy
and thats only possible when its between you and i

-*-Broken626-*-
-*-I was feeling totally over him. I told myself it was just a stupid crush ..over and done with ..then he looked at me-*-

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2003-12-23 07:26 PM

hmmm...it was ok......it didnt have the smoothest flow or anything i couldnt find a certain pattern of rhyming either. it was okj though.
-alex

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