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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 12-19-2003 09:55 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04


I Am Always Here!

Tell me if your hurting
Please let me feel your pain.
Because I will never leave you standing
In the pouring rain.

When your world is clouded over...
When you don't know who to turn to...
Just cry those tears and come to me
For I am always gonna be here for you!

Lay your head on my shoulder,
Tell me all your troubles and fears.
I will listen to your stories,
And I will try to dry your tears.

So, when your world goes out of control
Your life no longer a straight line
You can come to me...I'll make you see
That everything will soon be fine.

Your life is what you make of it
So, do you have got to do
But remember this: when you don't think you can go on
I am and always will be there for someone like you!
© Copyright 2003 Sweetpoet16m4u04 - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars


1 posted 12-19-2003 11:31 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

That's very sweet! So how many girls have responded to it?

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

young_blood
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2 posted 12-20-2003 12:27 PM       View Profile for young_blood   Email young_blood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for young_blood

ummm...it was cute. it didnt have a ny ground breaking thoughts or anything, but it was a solidly written poem.
-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

frolicking dolphin
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since 02-23-2003
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my own special world


3 posted 12-20-2003 02:24 PM       View Profile for frolicking dolphin   Email frolicking dolphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for frolicking dolphin

That was really sweet, it flowed really well too nice write

~*~Karen~*~

"One can never consent to creep when one feels the impulse to soar" - Helen Keller

kissa~rachelle
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nowhere special


4 posted 12-20-2003 04:37 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... It was so sweet. I wish more guys were like that! I hope to hear more of your poems.
~kissa~
WinterWren
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...Coming to


5 posted 12-21-2003 10:35 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Kinda makes me sad, but that's a different story. I really love this, thank you for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Strider612
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since 12-21-2003
Posts 46
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6 posted 12-22-2003 12:04 AM       View Profile for Strider612   Email Strider612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Strider612

Do the poets ever receive a reward for their work?  I hope you find your worthy prize for your labor.
Sweetpoet16m4u04
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7 posted 12-22-2003 04:44 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04

Thank you all so far for the wonderful comments that you have written if anyone wants to get in touch with me feel free to im me on aol instant messenger chrissccr18 or email me at soccerplayer4life04@hotmail.com i look forward to hearing more and posting more love poems and stuff like that
aussie teen
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since 09-27-2003
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8 posted 12-23-2003 10:47 PM       View Profile for aussie teen   Email aussie teen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aussie teen

this is soooooooooooooooooooooo sweet.... wish more guys were like that too in australia...... nice write.... keep up the writing.
Mel
Match
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9 posted 12-24-2003 01:17 AM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

I liked this, I guess your just one of those guys who is always there and is a super sweetie but never gets any action jk, anyways nice write!
Olive_8
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Canada


10 posted 01-01-2004 07:34 PM       View Profile for Olive_8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Olive_8

This is without a doubt the sweetest poem that i have ever read. I know that with the guys that i have been with, i wanted them to say those words to me, but they never did, and i lost all faith in men, but this goes to show you that there still are sweet guys out there that acutally will take the time out to make a woman feel good about herself...i loved it and thanks so much for sharing it with us, i am really looking forward to reading more from you....well done!

**There is no such thing as a promise!!**

crystalclearpoems
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11 posted 01-02-2004 12:49 PM       View Profile for crystalclearpoems   Email crystalclearpoems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for crystalclearpoems

very good poem!
muchos
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12 posted 01-02-2004 06:43 PM       View Profile for muchos   Email muchos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muchos

i just wanted to say that this is a great poem, and that Olive_8 is my sister.
Ixxi
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13 posted 01-02-2004 06:57 PM       View Profile for Ixxi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ixxi

That was a very good poem, it definitely made me feel better after reading it. It's romantic, easy to read, and a good rhyming pattern and rhythm. Keep it up!
moonguardian2004
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14 posted 01-04-2004 12:12 AM       View Profile for moonguardian2004   Email moonguardian2004   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonguardian2004

Every girl that has you for a friend is a very lucky person! Great job
devinechild22
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15 posted 01-05-2004 04:56 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

A sweet post. The only thing I wonder is if it's sincere or just a way to pick up the ladies. lol Either way it was nice.
                    *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

devinechild22
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16 posted 01-05-2004 04:56 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

A sweet post. The only thing I wonder is if it's sincere or just a way to pick up the ladies. lol Either way it was nice.
                    *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

Sweetpoet16m4u04
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17 posted 01-05-2004 07:26 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04

Yes it definitely is sincere coming straight from my heart. Thank you for all the great comments once again.
dodge_chick2003
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since 01-18-2004
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18 posted 08-05-2004 02:26 AM       View Profile for dodge_chick2003   Email dodge_chick2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dodge_chick2003

OMG!!! This is the sweetest poem i have ever read. I wish I could have someone who cared about me that much. Keep up the good work.
yankees01rugby
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since 08-13-2003
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19 posted 08-05-2004 09:41 AM       View Profile for yankees01rugby   Email yankees01rugby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yankees01rugby

that was really sweet! thats the kind of guy i have been searching for but cant find in my school!

"What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing."

tapper798
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since 07-20-2003
Posts 352
My own world


20 posted 08-06-2004 07:16 PM       View Profile for tapper798   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tapper798

awww wow, this is so sweet! I know very few guys that are as sweet as you, you're rare! Awesome poem, very sweet!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

*Alli4000*
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21 posted 08-07-2004 10:04 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

This poem is just sooo sweet...i'm at a loss of words!! Do you have a girlfriend? If you do, give this to her!!
GREAT JOB!!!

~Alli~

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

Manth88
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22 posted 08-23-2004 12:52 AM       View Profile for Manth88   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manth88

Hey,
You really must be a sweetie, wish I could find someone that sweet! I like yur poem alot! You could sweep any woman off their feet with that one!

!^*Manth88*^!

[This message has been edited by Manth88 (08-25-2004 01:03 AM).]

AtLsHawTy17
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23 posted 09-07-2004 11:25 PM       View Profile for AtLsHawTy17   Email AtLsHawTy17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AtLsHawTy17

i loved it but the only i dont like is the last line "I am and always will be there for someone like you!"
it would of sounded better if u just said "i am and always there for u"

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....

~DreamChild~
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24 posted 11-16-2004 06:28 PM       View Profile for ~DreamChild~   Email ~DreamChild~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~DreamChild~

i thought this one wa really felt out!

           ~Express Yourself~
          

 
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