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Teen Poetry #7

fear

instead
New Member

since 2003-12-19

Posts 3
monroe,nc

0 posted 2003-12-19 12:25 PM

fear the tear
that falls from the face
of the one you love
fear the race against time
against your pace
fear the crime
that lurks in space
fear the child
without a face
fear the trail
thats never been walked
fear the heart
that cant be broken
love the voice
that has yet spoken....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-12-19 09:22 AM

Welcome to Pip!!

I hope you will have a look around and enjoy all the great poetry.
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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2003-12-19 05:01 PM

this was a pretty good poem, the first line was alot better than the rest of the poem though. good work still
-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2003-12-19 10:45 PM

great words indeed.
why would you fear the heart that can't be broken?
because then that person wouldn't seem human?

This is a great piece, I love the ryhme, and the conciseness.
keep posting and welcome.
~Lex

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-12-19 11:33 PM

Well done!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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