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RedDiamond1307
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0 posted 2004-01-05 05:58 PM


People don't talk to me
because I look like a Bitch.
In their minds I seem to be,
the one to easily switch.
People don't  understand
cause I'm not like the rest.
I won't take your hand
cause I'll be the best.
Don't need a man
to stand behind,
cause everyone ran
when they seen I had a mind.
Sorry I'm not what you need,
Sorry I don't hide what I feel,
Sorry I take the lead,
Sorry I refuse to just deal.....

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muchos
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1 posted 2004-01-09 07:13 PM


i appreciate this poem from girl to girl. i think a lot of people out there are superficial. but what can ya do eh. and being you and standing up for you and being an individual and strong and independent. its great. good qualities. thats what i got from this. good write
sweet_lost_palestinian1
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2 posted 2004-01-10 12:14 PM


hi firST OF ALL...listen dont even think about what they think if u know urself u would'nt care soo listen just be the best and love urself .....even if u were one ......be thankful no matter how hard and difficult it could hurt ...because people these dayz are not qorth it...listen just read my poems u would understand what i mean,.....
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3 posted 2004-01-10 12:15 PM


I'm taking for granted,,,where this is posted, that you are a teen,,,,very good to see such a strong view so young,,,I'll be 33 soon (ugh), and, I've had this same attitude, for many yeasr,,,,,welcome to passions,,,,,take care
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

dinky
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4 posted 2004-01-11 12:44 PM


this was really good
i'll keep lookin for ur posts

xEmperorEmber
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5 posted 2004-01-11 08:20 PM


*scoots around the estrogen and slips in the door*

oh, hey guys! IM MALE! but i still think it was good. I hate guys who dont want girls with brains... cause i cant stand it any other way.. i dont understand guys... lol.. or girls.. im so so very alone...

good write

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6 posted 2004-01-11 08:46 PM


First off...
Welcome to passions!!!
This poem is awesome in all senses of the word. It shows strength and courage and individuality. Most people will hide who they are in order to accepted in a strangers eyes but your not scared and thats an incredible quality you should never loose. I wish i was more like you in that way. Great poem and i cant wait to read more from you in the future!!

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Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

RedDiamond1307
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7 posted 2004-01-11 10:17 PM


Thanks...I really don't like this poem... I think it was one of my poor ones... but I was just speaking what was on my mind... I'm sick of girls who stand behind their man... I stand beside mine...
kissa~rachelle
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8 posted 2004-01-11 10:27 PM


You go girl! I cant stand it when girls let their guys push them around, and hide behind them! It just gives guys more power, and that is one  thing they really dont need!~lol~ Great poem. I could really feel ya!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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