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chasing rain
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0 posted 2003-12-18 07:09 PM


I found sanity knocking at my door
He fell on my mat
And dripped through the fibers
Soaked my socks, so I took them off to the laundry
And cleaned them.

Sanity came by the next day,
This time by my window sill.
I pulled back the curtains and let him in
But I hit his ladder
And he..well...ouch.

I ran into sanity outside the market.

Or rather, I ran over him.

I wrote him a "get well" card,
But did not recall his address,
Since he moved around a lot
And didn't visit very often.
I never understood why.

3 days later, I got a letter.

"F".

* * * * *
I gave it away too soon. I'm a bit rusty. Foh-give-ee-ness, peas. *bow*

-Leah

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muchos
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1 posted 2003-12-18 09:42 PM


hmmmm...this one makes me think a little bit. theres a total hidden message there, but im not sure if its telling me your crazy, or the worlds corrupt...lol i dunno. i thought it was alright. your a little warped. those are the good poets...
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2 posted 2003-12-18 11:25 PM


Ha, ha....so THAT's why I haven't been able to find Sanity! Very clever.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

chasing rain
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3 posted 2003-12-21 11:37 PM


Yes! I AM CRAZY! XD
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