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Baby D
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since 2003-10-26
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0 posted 2003-12-18 01:16 AM


Although he's nowhere near me,
and i can't see his face,
i can still feel his arms around me,
and his heart beating at a steady pace,
i can feel his hot breath,
and hear his voice whisphering in my ear,
playful and seductive,
and suddenly i wish that he were near.
i can taste his sweet kiss,
and feel his lips against mine,
he's surely be in jail,
if great kisses were a crime,
i remember the way he spoke to me,
and all the words he said,
the way he said he loved me,
and that he truly cared.
somehow i know that it's the truth,
just by simply looking into his eyes,
i know that he truly loves me,
there's nothing for him to hide

[This message has been edited by Baby D (12-18-2003 01:18 AM).]

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muchos
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 102

1 posted 2003-12-18 09:55 PM


i like this poem, and i can relate, but it makes me think, are all guys like that, because ive felt like that with all the guys i've been with, but maybe there just really good at seducing girls, just to get into the're pants....im a little skeptical. anyways. nice write, keep it up@!!
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Beneath the northern stars
2 posted 2003-12-18 11:26 PM


This is beautiful....a true, honest love is so precious....

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

DarkAngel73554
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since 2003-12-10
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somewhere in tha middle of nowhere
3 posted 2003-12-19 12:29 PM


~!nice piece~!
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