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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
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Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-12-17 12:10 PM


hung for treason

you are a wasted traitor
for you cant even lie about me
without messing up those details, the mark of
being a wasted traitor.

a wasted traitor with a wasted life
hides in the back of my paper tent
and i feel the ful, black eyes of
a wasted traitor with a wasted life.

this wasted life has been lost a million times
and each return has brought new reprimands,
im forgetting you forever beacuse
this wasted life has been lost a million times.

im lost on the inside like you on the outside,
but i hide the inside beneath smiles and laughs,
my curdles from the pressure because
im lost on the inside like you on the outside.

i'll bring you to trial and hang you wasted traitor,
in the nooses made from your own decietfulness.
love me forever in falsehood and always in lies,
i'll bring you to trial and hang you wasted traitor.

[This message has been edited by young_blood (12-17-2003 04:32 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-12-17 01:11 PM


That was very powerful! I'd hate to get on your bad side after reading that.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

young_blood
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2 posted 2003-12-21 01:38 PM


thank you very much...haha...im not an angry person....really
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