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PrincessNets
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0 posted 2003-12-16 02:34 PM


I posted this poem a while ago, but I thought that I would post it again.  I felt this way toward a good friend of mine and I am now having feelings toward another guy who is a good friend of mine.  I was reading this and it reminded me all about how hopeful I got and then the hopelessness I felt after I found out he didn't like me.... anyway... here it is.
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Confusion fills my mind
As I sort through
Other people’s comments and
My own feelings.
I don’t know what to think
When people say you like me.
It seems too good to be true,
That someone like you,
Could have feelings for
Someone like me.
I look at facts and here-say,
Which tells me it could be true.
I can’t break down my wall
And believe it just yet,
Because everytime I do,
I end up picking up the pieces of
My broken heart and
I can’t believe that it won’t happen again.
Although confusion overwhelms me,
I see what is happening
And I realize that I could get hurt,
But I open my heart to you anyway.


© Copyright 2003 Jeanette Gabriele - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-12-16 06:47 PM


Everything is a risk. Who knows, maybe this time it'll all work out. Good luck and good write!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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