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Brigid WillowKeeper
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0 posted 2003-12-15 12:17 PM



You think you're worthy of my love,
when all you do is put me down?

You think you're worthy of my trust,
when all you do is betray me?

You're standing right in front of me,
shrouding yourself in lies,
much like a suit of armour.
I know the truth, however.
And your armour rusts and crumbles before you.

You pathetic vermon,
look at you trying to save yourself.
Trying to create another shroud of lies,
You're hopeless.
You are a pure tragedy.

My intellect of the true story
consumes you in a blaze.
Your, already, pitiful composure
is degraded in a firey chasm
that is to be called me.

You could save yourself
but, yet, you make it worse
with lies, and more lies.
You are to stubborn to admit to your own mistakes.
And damn you for that.

I leave you now,
a pile of worthless dust on the floor.
Only for someone to sweep under a rug,
where you will spend an eternity
with the other perjurers.

You think you are worthy of my mercy?
Then why don't you ask for it?
Go ahead, isn't it worth a try?
After all, your fate is on the line here.

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1 posted 2003-12-15 12:32 PM


YOU GO GIRL! That's the way to tell 'em! Hope he realizes his mistakes soon. Very well done and powerful!

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

Brigid WillowKeeper
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2 posted 2003-12-15 12:56 PM


Heh heh, thanks sky! I would just love to say that to the girl this is directed to. I can see her simple mind hurting itself trying to figure it out.
*evil laughter*

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