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Teen Poetry #7

Forced Beliefs

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since 2003-06-27

Posts 43

0 posted 2003-12-11 08:38 PM

Cringed paper bearing thoughts,
Leaving traces of her love
Over the pains I've come,
only to turn around with binoculars
The words say of one she remembers,
that of one who made her feel
The description is of my own,
or so I make my mind believe...

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2003-12-12 01:33 AM

really enjoyed this, it was one of those that I had to read twice to pull the deeper meaning out of. Nicely done I really like the way you fit your words together and I couldn't pick a favorite line cause I liked the whole thing. Well done.
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