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broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-12-09 09:40 PM


I walked away from that night thinking nothing was wrong
Not knowing the next time id call you'd be gone
Why didnt you tell me this wouldn't go anywhere
Instead of getting my hopes up and acting like you care
Youmake me so angry sometimes with all your lies
I often break down i wish you could hear my cries
Maybe then you wouldnt be so cruel
the last time i saw you i felt like such a fool
you turned away and acted like you didnt know me anymore
I guess in a way thats true
All i asked for was a simple hello from you
I can see your face clearer now than ever before
the tears are drying i might be able to survive through heartbreak once more
I wanted to be with you forever and you replied with its over
I suppose were better off alone you dont need me
but in just about every way possible i miss you
I guess in someways im to blame
it was my heart in the first place that i wouldnt let you claim
so its all over and it just doesnt seem right
we could’ve taken this to a whole new level
but you just werent feeling it so now i have to let you go
and dont worry i wont tell anyone about how you said you loved me
i love you so much and all these feelings you'll never see
I wouldn’t have walked away that nite
if i knew i was walking away from “us” too

-*-broken627-*-
love is a puzzle when the pieces dont fit you just have to move on


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PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
1 posted 2003-12-09 10:13 PM


wow.. that was a good poem... made me want to cry.. I think we have all been in that kind of a situation.  Keep writing... can't wait to read more.

-Jeanette-

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