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wishing on a star
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since 2003-12-03
Posts 19
sleeping in my warm bed =)

0 posted 2003-12-08 09:14 PM



it seems like everyone is changing
and im staying the same
everyone is moving on
and im gettin left out of the game

everyone is growing up
but im still a young child
everyone is so different
i wanna be crazy & wild

................................
i regret those thoughts from way back then
i wish i were smarter and wiser too
but now i think and act different
i realize I miss that child i once knew

i wish i could reverse everything
an go back and savor my childhood
you can never go back and change it
no matter how much you wish you could


here's the deal I wrote the part above the dots when I was about 9 or 10 and Im 15 now I found this poem in my room cleaning it one day and decided to add on and finish it up! lemme know what you think

young naive & vulnerable to the world

© Copyright 2003 Amanda Burrell - All Rights Reserved
broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon
1 posted 2003-12-08 09:26 PM


This was moving i feel the same way...im 15 too sometimes i wish i could go back to the younger years but thats life huh ...i feel you*
keep up the good work hun!
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branden726
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since 2000-09-25
Posts 607
Bay City, MI
2 posted 2003-12-09 08:36 AM


What I wouldn't give to be a teen once more. I just and turned 18 in july... Eh what a tradgedy now there trying to tell me i have to take responsiblity for my actions =P. Nice poem liked it alot!
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