not bacon, BEGGIN!!! strip it down

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duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

0 posted 2003-12-08 02:24 PM

cha ching! payday!
I gots me some paper to
spend,
help "find myself" in
this vattt of liquid
FAT.
organicalisticness of my
surroundings.  a want some
of that, yeah that, no, right
there, hmmm, some of this arial
navy blue, left. forget your pass-
word?  just give me ten dollars and
I will hit it twice hard.  jimminy can.
read
the
on
a
ca-splatter!! smash, bonk, doink, wang.
fan-pics
pornographic feelings for myself.
NOW, follow the directions, home, pgup, end, pgdn,
delete!! delete!! delete!!
Do as you're told or fade into
that dark abyss of nothingness
we like to call DEATH
doesn't it smell good?

if you read this, you are going to die, (eventually, of course).

PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

1 posted 2003-12-08 04:52 PM

Ummm...ummmm...ummmmm....wow. That was interesting. It was a little strange but the weirdness kept my attention.

duncan idaho
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

2 posted 2003-12-09 01:57 PM

it makes sense if you are high
usually about 10 feet off the ground should be high enough.

DON't FaLL

duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

3 posted 2003-12-09 02:05 PM

i'm trapped down here
aaaaaaaaaaah!

muchos
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

4 posted 2003-12-09 09:47 PM

i absolutely enjoy reading his poems. i dont know why. when i pick one out, i always end up having a smile on my face. maybe its the whole nothingness bunched up into a somethingness that makes it all worth while. groovy babe. keep it up, make me smile!

PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

5 posted 2003-12-09 10:19 PM

I just want to say that even though this poem doesn't make sense...it was funny. (Yes, I already commented, but I just had to put my two cents in again)

Missthang
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since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

6 posted 2003-12-14 09:49 PM

Ok. I originally read this poem because I though the topic ("not bacon, BEGGIN!!! strip it down) was the COOLEST and funniest thing i had ever read. i read it in hope of a good laugh and that's exactly what I did. You seem like a fun lovin' kind of person and I think that's so cool. But the words of your "poem" were just so random that you can't help but reading it and finding it interesting. It's like a big bunch of mess put into and even messy form and it created organization. i call this write, ORGANIZED CHAOS...great! :-)

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
-Thaddeus Golas

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

7 posted 2003-12-29 02:27 AM

It does make sense when your high. About five bowls should do it! ~LOL~ Five bowls high of course.lol
~KISSA~

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