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adbdesperado18
Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 33


0 posted 2003-12-06 05:27 PM


Finally,
this time,
I found the one,
to share all my love

this season
A sole problem
exists
To this man
I’m not the one

How funny,
I still care deeply
For I fathom all thoughts
I understand,
I’m not his love
I never will possess that blessing
Yet,
I can’t rid my heart of emotion

I care,
always will
adoration will never die
And never be exposed

Consequence,
I subsist with only friendship,
This connection, however,
too bleak and burdensome to bear

I desire
to spend
every free moment with him
Anger,
That brings anguish,
Arises when he ignores,
Me

I put forth so much
And him so little
Handling this,
Remains not an option
I bid attachment
Goodbye, Forever


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peachesNcream
Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-12-06 06:17 PM


Great write! I haven't seen you in this forum before, so I'm guessing you're new! I'm sure you'll like it here!

I think you're allowed to only post three poems a day, I THINK. Just thought I'd let ya know! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

broken627
Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon
2 posted 2003-12-06 06:21 PM


Great poem i could really feel the emotion probably because im feeling the same way...
cant wait to hear more
-*-broken627-*-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-12-09 02:21 AM




duncan idaho
Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70
dune
4 posted 2003-12-09 01:54 PM


stop using the word exist,
it sounds desperate

but you get my two opposables

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