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muchos
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since 2003-11-29
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0 posted 2003-12-06 01:25 AM


your always there for me
to help me with my pain
you made me feel better
when i was so ashamed
your an awesome friend to have
to talk to day and night
and if i asked for one thing
it would be to never fight
i hope we're friends forever
and wish we'd see no end
for if that day did come to us
i'll remember you as a friend

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pammy
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 50
California
1 posted 2003-12-06 05:30 PM


i like this.  its a good message to your friend

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2 posted 2003-12-07 06:10 PM


I really hoped you showed this to your friend because it was really great. You do have to take a second and look though no matter what friends will fight, and say things they do not mean. If you remember that you should be friends for a long time. Great post.
frolicking dolphin
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since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
3 posted 2003-12-08 06:25 PM


I sent this one to my bestfriend cuz it's so true but the words are never spoken between me and my friend cuz we cant even imagine a fight, nice write

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

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