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pammy Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50California |
Why Why does life always find a way to disappoint us ? Why can’t things go my way? Why do people always say one thing, yet never mean what they say? Why do people always change their minds? And why do good things have to change? Why do you have to go and break my heart again? Everybody seems to think the same, it’s as if they’re all apart of the same twisted game. Two people in this world that will never know, just what they’re missing. All because some random person told you something about me. Why do people always get involved in everyone else’s lives? If it weren’t for you, this would not have happened, but once again my heart gets broken. You told me something about this guy, and made my hopes soar into the sky. But then I find out what you said to me wasn’t true, and the guy likes somebody else. He’s mad at me for thinking that I liked him, when really he should be mad at you. But you have your way of making people believe that your always right Why can’t everyone keep their thoughts to themselves? Why can’t people live their own lives? Why do you always have to tell me these things, and make me cry? |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Life is really confusing sometimes!  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
I'm sure ther are a lot of people in this world who feel the same way. it's funny how the question "why" seems to be the perfect response to every situation, both good and bad. but, everything happenes for a reason, even if we can't see it and our question of "why" will be answered. "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Because hearts are broken, hearts are mended, tears are shed, laughs are shared, friends are lost, friends are found ... but life ... eventually ... ends. I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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Brigid WillowKeeper Member
since 2003-08-24
Posts 88OHIO IN USA |
Oh man!!! I totally relate!! I go through that all the time. At least, I did. I just seclude myself no, not listening to others around me, not having any friends to throw me off track and screw up my life. It helps this phase called high school to go much faster. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Not your best write. Sometimes more thought and less personal emotion/ experience. Just my opinion. It reads more like a story and less like a poem. Kinda whiny too don't you think. You know I love ya but here's my violin playing for ya poo. Just joking. If you ever need to talk let me know. Keep the writing up. I gotta go. "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
i know how you feel and thats all i can say......... good write though |
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