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Ally Stone
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since 2003-10-20
Posts 48
D.C.

0 posted 2003-12-04 08:58 PM


This is the only thing me and my brother have ever done together, it's different from my other stuff, cause he's into the rap thing and I'm not really. Anyway, I know it's long, but enjoy!

The sunshine feels a little colder these days, while the summer dies, I'll succumb to the waves, or fashion Nazis and part-time relationships, middle class dope fiends, and 40 minute acid-trips, while the stereo I never paid for, blasts out rhymes to yield a savior, and I bleed my love through poetry, my pain in colored seas, all red, diluted by the weeping willows, crying cause they know God still owes some money to the mafia, and his tactics become sloppier, coke habit gets the best of him, while alcohol the rest of him, and no more is hope for you and me, murdered by society, in the forged name of piety, and I've forgotten what I was fighting for, was it Jesus or the army corps? Then in the foggy weather, all sides blur together, thereupon epiphany: our target was humanity!
Stand up, feel strong, but I know it's not the song that makes the man, nor does the artist makes the fan, for life just happens, by and by, as the warm noon copper sky, keeps on falling, keeps on calling me to come and leave this planet, reminding me how I can't stand it, but I pretend that I'm in love, pretend to see above, fresh air is all I need, some words on which to feed, and I'll feel better in the dawn, when the song breaks out anew, floats up high, to my seductive lullaby, calls it self, calls it wealth in character, rhymes to carry your heart, to another start, so I just want to fall again, cause I always keep the friends, though letting go has been so hard, with pride I'll wear the scar, understand a little more a little more, that fear brings me to the door, of shadows, me and my emotive battles with my psyche, so did you ever like me? Even though I pushed too hard? Even though I stepped too far?
It's invisible happiness, but it's easier to laugh at us, after we feel better, though the warmer weather can still induce nostalgia, runs lines across and down the road to your home, drive past, and the feeling last only but a second, while the past to me still beckons, no I look to now, the moment yields the how, and perception finds a truth, when my eyes look back at you, a memory and an enemy of my stability, echo of my ability, the patience I've exerted, a quest to find this purpose, it's a self that might've been, the smiles I still rend, and despair falls like a blanket, only my good mood has sank it, and my eyes still hold a flame, contentment in the same, the way things have worked out, with the loss of any doubt, regret has passed me by, so I no longer need to cry just to prove I'm still alive, for the magic or the eyes, and the glow of something lots, lets me lose the loss, and now! The sadness stops!
So Thank You!
Thank you for your time, and thank you for auburn skies, and thank you for being real, thanks for every moment that you feel, than you for your eyes, and thank you for the sighs, thank you for the muse, and thank you for the cues, and thank you for only trying, and thank you for any crying that you ever sent my way. Than you for the patience, and thank you for the day since you first showed me a way.
I lie now in bleak starlight, the black, only a darker white, and it's only for a while, still, I'd trade it all in just to see another smile, and thus persistence has only plagued me, yet that's drive that's pushed and made me and I say thank you once again, just because you've stayed my friend, and just know that as long as I draw breath, I never could forget, for I still feel and still remember, every tiny ember of the candle.


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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2003-12-05 07:14 PM


Wow, it was long, but good. Ususally i wouldn't read something so long, but this was awesome.
~kissa~

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
2 posted 2003-12-05 09:12 PM


^^^I agree. This was awesome. VERY good job, for both of you creative writers.

Tell me, how does it feel, to treat me like you do?~Orgy

Ally Stone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48
D.C.
3 posted 2003-12-06 12:35 PM


Thanks you guys!! I was worried nobody would read it b/c of the length. Thanks again!
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