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mara marti
Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 10
Chicago, Illinois

0 posted 2004-01-04 08:26 PM



: (I love you and I dont know why
But I feel it when I look into your eyes

We've only been friends
but when will you ever see?
That I dont want to pretend
that I really want you with me

I love your smile
it shines like the sun
Oh, what about when you laugh
now I know your the one

Can we please be together?
I swear I will love you forever.

But how will you ever know?
If my feelings I refuse to let show

I think im afraid that you'll turn me down
and I really do not want to look like a clown

But I cannot just stand around
I need someone, and that One has been found.

So then, why do I love you if we can't be together?
I hope you love me too
You might not ever be mine
But i'll still love you inside

My feelings for you are so damn true
But I still ask myself
why do I love you?
and then I think....
just because I do.

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Star T
Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
1 posted 2004-01-04 08:43 PM


that was so very sweet.i hope the person feels as strongly as u do.and pls tell the person..he/she deserves to know.and trust me u'll feel relieved when u unload the burden.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-01-04 09:45 PM


That was so beautiful. I can relate to it a lot. I have a friend i feel like that for, and i am scared to tell him how i feel, because i don't wanna mess our friendship up, but i am not sure how much longer i can hide my feelings from him. My advice is to tell him. and i think that i am going to take my own advice too! I hope everything works out for you, and i hopw to hear more poems too!
always
~kissa~

frolicking dolphin
Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 268
my own special world
3 posted 2004-01-05 05:27 PM


I can also really relate to this, while I know the best thing to do is tell him I know I could never do it because I fear rejection so much, nice write, I thought in certain parts the rhyme and rhthym seemed somewhat forced, but overall nice work

~*~Karen~*~

~You can close your eyes to things that you don’t want to see, but you can’t close your heart to things you don’t want to feel~

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