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Teen Poetry #7

The WInd (Jealousy)

morgansmiles
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 25
hicksville

0 posted 2003-12-03 09:34 PM

Jealousy hits me
Like the wind switching tide
Like the rain to the ground
And all control is lost
Only strength can endure it

The ache in my head
It makes me scream
I want to make them feel my pain
To hear my cries
And take all of my pressure
On to their own lives

If only I could show them
The way I am going to die
If I could take the torturous and constant heartache
That fills my own soul
And pour it out into them
Then when the wind blew
I wouldn’t be the only one who felt it

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

1 posted 2003-12-04 09:13 AM

Morgan,
Another great poem! I knew you could do it...haha. Seriously this is a good poem... keep writing chica... and don't let the whole "crush" scene... "crush" you.

Love ya,
Nets

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

2 posted 2003-12-08 10:48 PM

Great emotions. nice job.

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