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broken627
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since 2003-11-26
Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-30 04:03 PM


I saw you today
i lost all track of words
i had no idea what to say
so all i muttered was hey
i cant eat i cant sleep
these constant thoughts of you continue to creep
cant i get through one day without you passing through my head
your feelings for me are dead
i wanna talk to you
but you dont seem to care
when i try you just sit there with a blank stare
its obvious now that youve moved on
and you and i are completly done
Ill be alright ill be just fine
ill try and find something
that will consume all my time
but before i let go
i want you to know
not a day goes by
that i dont think of you
-*-I love you-*-


    Hey guys thanks so much for all the feedback i cant tell you how much i appreciate it!  
                                -*-Lotsa Love-*-
                                    -*-Broken627-*-

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Ally Stone
Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48
D.C.
1 posted 2003-11-30 06:03 PM


Let me just suggest a color other than pink for posting. It's cool and all, but it hurts my eyes after a while. Sorry to sound so old!
--a--

branden726
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Senior Member
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607
Bay City, MI
2 posted 2003-12-01 08:19 PM


Nice, Very good poem. And hey pink is that bad people just need to chill.
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
3 posted 2003-12-02 06:33 PM


Awesome poem! I loved it, it was good, but sad! I hope to see a lot more.
~kissa~

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