Loves Black Cloak Worn Solely By Me

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Teen Poetry #7

Loves Black Cloak Worn Solely By Me

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-11-27 11:19 PM

well i wrote this on the fly....no stopping to think of what exactly i'm writing. i was just messing around with this, but i thought someone might enjoy...feel free to give lots and lots of feedback!! thanks

Loves Black Cloak Worn Solely By Me

This house is not a home
although it bears my address.
I hold no home in my heart
for it travels constantly.
My home is where the heart is
And my heart is far from here,
Caught with another,
Life to another.
I've been forgiven this
Fault of mine to please you.
This whole understanding of
You holding my emotions bare in you breast
Is not foreign, yet not famliar,
So catch this phrase of mine:
"Yet another lost to her,
Yet another to play a part.
Yet another leaves no stir,
Yet another dies in heart."
Repeat this in the mirror while
Turning round and round,
Soon it'll come true
And Cupid will visit your house.
This all started with me being
Such a lost soul, a homeless beggar,
Now it's turned into a lesson on
How love hunts those who evade it.

this is a lovely stalker......

[This message has been edited by young_blood (11-27-2003 11:20 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
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1 posted 2003-11-27 11:22 PM

yet another I love from you.
Wonderful piece.
Thank you for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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