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*Dark Princess* Junior Member
since 2003-04-13
Posts 22lost in the shadows |
Dont know exactly what this is....Just got done listenin to my friends band practice and this came out.....Please tell me if u like it or have any advice I dont care (edited by moderator) What chu want from me Somethin Before Look U see me Standin there Dont look at me I know U wont Forget (about) me Im hot Ur not Forget (about) me Not like that Not like her Im a They call me (edited by moderator) [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-28-2003 08:53 PM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
That was different from a lot of the ones i have read so far, but i like it. It was really good. ~kissa~ |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
wow. sounds angry. let it all out let it alllllll out! And remember, there's nothing wrong with imitation voodoo as long as it's a nice clean torture. ok i take that back there's no such thing. but really, you should write like this all the time and keep nothing bottled up inside of you. Meg I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy" |
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