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Teen Poetry #7

hey heres another reply if you want to!

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-27 06:43 PM

staring at ur face in the picture frame
wondering if my life will ever be the same
broken pieces of my heart
shattered to the ground
once again missing you hoping that you'll come around
So why do i bother
why do icare
why try for something that just isn't there
Dont call me i dont wanna talk
even if i wanted to i dont know if i could
my voice chokes and my hands shake
i hear your voice i can almost hear my heart break
but im not gunna shed another tear
I wont spend another nite worrying about u
ill move on and find someone new
but i know in my heart there will never be another me and you

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2003-11-27 09:16 PM

That was a really good poem. I really liked it. It sort of reminds me of someone i know.
~kissa~

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

2 posted 2003-11-29 02:02 PM

wow. heavy. he sure sounds like a jerk but he can't be all bad if he inspires that kind of feeling in you. and besides there are plenty of other fish in the sea so if you kill a few with toxic waste no one will ever know. hehe

Meg

I give you my number when you sad you call me i make you happy- "Don't Worry Be Happy"

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

3 posted 2003-11-29 06:59 PM

thats awesome. really good, it flowed well and u used just enough good vocabulary.

great job,
lotz of love

~~**~**~~Keryn~~**~**~~

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