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Teen Poetry #7

you not cheo

mysticangel001
New Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 7

0 posted 2003-11-27 05:05 PM

i dont love cheo
i love you
your the guy for me
not him
dont listen to these roomers you here
for there not true
im not going to leave you
for i love you
if you feel the same
then dont leave me
if your the one for me
then stay with thee
for I LOVE YOU

mysticangel001
New Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 7

1 posted 2003-11-27 05:07 PM

hay guyz srry i knida put this 2X. well can u please add to or somthing to help me inprove this and my poetry** thanx
Karen
aka
CareBear

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

2 posted 2003-11-27 06:55 PM

I do not love cheo,
I love you!
You're the guy for me,
not him;
Don't listen to these rumors you hear-
for, they're not true.
I'm not going to leave you,
for i love you.
If you feel the same,
then don't leave me...
If you're the one for me
then stay with me forever
for, I LOVE YOU!

(I had a little punctuating fun here, I think Thanksgiving turkey made me a little bit insane

)

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

[This message has been edited by IndigoEve (11-27-2003 06:56 PM).]

mysticangel001
New Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-11-27 08:01 PM

thanx happy thanxgiving

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