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under the surface |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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under the surface I can feel my thoughts breaking over you like a heart so lost that the belief was never true. and the lights they came, they brought succession, in my mind, i'd never trust. and the days they ran, they died in confession, in my head, it was only lust. chorus: will you have this end forever? will my feelings be fake for so long? i'll talk about my truthful lies, but only here, this heart is gone. i can hear your tears whispering to you like a demon tempting to forget truth. and my eyes they run, the come suspecting, what i never knew. and my fears they scream, they seem appealing, mixing with what i do. bridge: is there something more to me? is there something more to you? never get to know each other falsehood carries us through. hidden beneath the pond scum is a lake of deepest blue, will you follow me for a swim or stay staring at the green hue? now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
It's hard to see under the surface...I liked this a lot.  ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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UnsilencedWords666 Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 63Broken Memories & Falling Tears |
this was extremely well written, yet again-you have impressed me with your work...care to share some of your talent with me? *~*Nessa Bear*~* You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~* |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
This was so well written!I loved it thank for you honestness about my poem!I cant wait to read more of your stuff! -*-broken627-*- |
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