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broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-26 11:27 PM

Its been months
and your still on my brain
its like this constant pain
i was foolish to think you would still care
but now i have to wake up every morning knowing you wont be there
I should know not to trust people
I just didnt think this would go anywhere
then i started to care
You told me you wanted me
I told you i would consider
a few days past
I changed my mind
I wanted you too...
all you said forget you
I guess i hurt you alittle bit more then i meant to...
Where did all your thoughts of me go
it looks like they wentout the window
I guess this is what i deserve
I played games to get your attention
I got it at first
All the fights we would get into
stay in my mind
Ive never missed anyone so much
I always ask about you...
People say that youve moved on
youve always had a thousand girls
why am i still thinking about you
I tell people im fine dont worry about me
Inside im dying for them to see
I just want a chance to be you
and for these tears to stop their flow

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

1 posted 2003-11-26 11:34 PM

First of WELCOME...now, I really like yourpoem becasue I can definitly relate to it...it definitly hit me right in th middle of my heart and brought a tear to my eye as I aplied it to my life...good job! and welcome again:o)

*~*Nessa Bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2003-11-27 02:15 AM

hey,
first of all, welcome to PIP. it sucks that you're in this situation (if the poem relates to real life, which in my opinion it seems like it does) i think most of us have been there, so this poem does a good job of letting people see how it relates to their own life. all in all... it was a pretty good first post.
-bergundy-

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

3 posted 2003-11-27 10:39 AM

Welcome to pip, I really liked this, I could really relate to it because I have so much trouble getting over people I loved that have since left my life.

~*~Karen~*~

~All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them~Walt Disney

martina
Member

since 2003-06-19

Posts 59

4 posted 2003-11-28 06:54 PM

Hi welcome to pip I really liked your poem it really was a great poem I hope to read more of them soon.

Martina

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

5 posted 2003-11-28 09:45 PM

I loved your poem. It was really touching. I think a lot of people can relate to it in some way or another! I hope to read more!
~kissa~

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